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Friday 2 December 2016

Character Writing...

On a spine chilling day, with a slight shower of snow freezing the creek and lake. The house was freezing up and the ground persisted on cracking and cracking. “Mum Mum” Yelled Aaron, “The grounds freezing up”. As Mum rushed into the room a piece of the hard spruce floor smashed open. “Mum are you OK” said Aaron!!! Blood gushed out of the wound she just got recently but Aaron still had to shut all of the windows and doors. He rushed around the house shutting door by door window by window. As he rushed to the last door he smashed into the wall. Aaron smacked straight through the wall onto the hard freezing ground...

As he started to open his eyes he thought he was a living corpse but he was really in the bushes eating leaves. Aaron touched the back of his head and he felt a big surprise. He felt that a whole chunk of his head was hanging out of his skull...Soon enough he started acting crazy. He started running around screaming, as he ran through the bush into the abandoned lake he tripped and smashed straight through the thick ice...He thought that he was having hypothermia but he was actually trapped under the thick ice. Aaron started screaming under the water but it sounded so weird. Aaron started punching the ice, the more the ice cracked the harder Aaron punched. Aaron could feel his lungs fill up with water and he just gave up...

Aaron opened his eyes and it all looked clear blue but he he saw one man dressed in a puffy jacket with a huge axe. The vision he could see was just the man swinging away at the thick ice. He divided into the water to get Aaron but Aaron was already drowning. The man swam back up with Aaron and Aaron was in a death state. The man started spring Aaron untill Aaron started coughing and waking up. Are you alright said the man. “What's your name” said Aaron, my names Steve. “Thank you so much” said Aaron. “Where do you live” said Steve. “Here I’ll take you”. “Here...This is where I live” said Aaron in shock. Aarons house was all frozen and his mother was not there.

“Where can she be...Where can she be” said Aaron in panic...”I think she's at the hospital because she got such a deep wound”, “Then what are you waiting for let's go” said Steve. As Aaron and Steve walk to the hospital they hitchhike to get there faster but a dodge black van pulls up and picks them up. “Where are you guys heading” “To the hospital” said Aaron in frightness. As they drive through the night they see gangs, fighting and violence. “Here you guys are”said the man. As Aaron and Steve hop out of the van he speeds away. “Why are we in the middle of the neighborhood” says Aaron. Come on let get out of here fastly. As the enter the enterance of the hospital they go to the desk and ask for Aarons mothers name. But she wasnt there...

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