This is my rubric for this term and I think it is Amazing.
As soon as I heard the bell I ran out of the door in excitement YELLING ‘’ITS FIAFIA ITS FIAFIA’’ other people were doing it to so I ran out of the gates and waited for the crossing patrols to pull out there signs out so I ran to my car and my Mum and Dad were so nice they brought me and my brother snacks so we munched away and the even brought us drinks. As soon as I got home I had A shower and I got changed then we waited for my cousin and my aunty. As they entered the door I played with my little cousin outside. When I heard my Dad say lets go we walked to Our school named Pt .England the reason we had to walk because my dad checked our schools parking and it was stuffed. When we walked there there were heaps of food stands we had to try to find A set when we got on to my set Mr Burt said all fiafia kid go to your changing rooms. When we got in to our changing rooms everyone was hiding in little gaps getting changed.
When they got changed we went out to Fiafia and We sat down We watched Really awesome performances then it was our turn one stage I was nervous but I still did it when i went up on the stage there were thousands of people staring at us I but it felt weird because when the Hip Hop group went up to perform all of the front rows legs were shaking but when parents were there I felt brave. We did One Direction, Skrillex, Chris Brown, Trumpets, Macklemore, When we got off every on we cheering and clapping. 
