Once upon a time there was a penguin named Gunter. Gunter had a very hard life because his family got eaten by a leopard seal. Gunter survived however by swimming away his heart was broken. He was an explorer Gunter was brave, strong and fast He travelled the whole sea. And the whole of his country to see what lives in the sea and see how fresh the water is. The water is so fresh that it is made up of 70%of freshwater.
While he was traveling he hit into a thing that felt like no ordinary thing and it was the leopard seal so the leopard was chasing him for a day until the leopard seal gave up he was puffed. So he carried on with his life. His life had lots of intresting things like finding things like money paint and a bottle of food it was baked beans.
So he made a fire and cooked the baked beans and ate the baked beans. After he ate the baked beans he built shelter because it started to pour down with rain. He freaked out because thunder gushed down. As soon as it stopped he found the leopard seal chased Gunter again but Gunter got a stick and Hit the leopard seal as hard as he could and the leopard seal started to cry.
So the leopard seal started to cry and Gunter never saw that mean beast again. Gunter found a home and lived there for ever. And on that very day it was his birthday he got nothing but he knew that his family was always next to him so he started crying and on that very night his family mysteriously came back and they knew where he lived so they traveled to find him and they would not give up to find him.
Awesome narrative Michael. It made me laugh when Gunter hit the seal on the head and it started to cry. Please try and add speech marks (dialogue) into your writing. Keep up the great work. Don't forget to add an image. Maybe you could turn this narrative into a movie?
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