Writing a Narrative 2

It was 25 degrees in the car, it felt like 50 degrees because Mum never let us put down the windows. John and Jack felt like going home but they knew that they were going to ride the best rollercoaster of all eternity. So as soon as we parked up we all collapsed to the hard gravel and breathed that fresh air into our lungs, “your Mum’s weird” said the two brothers John and Jack. “No she's not” said George. “THEN WHY DID SHE KEEP THE WINDOWS UP” said John in a angrily tone “ok ok you don't have to shout at least we never died” George said, but they had more better things to worry about.

“THE EVIL RUN” pretty scary stuff said John. George and Jack looked at each other and started laughing “Why are you laughing nothing's funny” said John “have you ever been on the Panic Paradise” said George and Jack. What's this Panic Paradise said John Anxiously. Are you serious !!! It's the only rollercoaster that will make you vomit or even worst... DIE.

Do you think John knows what he’s in for said George, yup his in for a real treat HAHAHA!!! As they entered the theme park they made a deal with each other. Ok if you ride every ride including the Panic Paradise I will give you 20$ said George. John said “you're on”. The first ride they went on was called the Haunted Mine. George and Jack thought it will scare him a little but still COCKY. Then they tried the Brain Twister, that did no affect whatsoever. “Hey I think it's time to go on the second scariest ride in this theme park, unless you guys are SCARED” said John. “Um yea of course we're not scared. You're ON” said George. “You kind of stumbled the first two words out”, George laughed. “Be quiet at least i'm not scared of kiddy land over by the Whack a mole”. “That was when I was 5 ok now i'm 12, MAN you don't have to go into the past George” “Yea right” chuckled George.

“Um sir you never buckled me in  properly sir sir SIR” John said the ride will be taking off in 5 seconds. 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh John screamed with fear. “Why are you screaming, It the first bit of the Roller Coaster” said George. “I NOT BUCKLED IN PROPERLY” Shouted John. Ok ok don't panic ummm, pull that lever down oh no umm George Struggled to find out. “You’ve been really Cocky all these years and I think you should pay” said Jack, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

THE END.