The Abandoned Forest

There were dark spruce forest, frozen rivers and dead leafs everywhere. “Wow, is this how autumn is on a farm” said Samantha.

“Yup” said her Dad.

“I want to go back home like our real home in the city, why can't we go somewhere except for this place” said Samantha. After they moved in all there stuff she went to go explore the dark forest. “WOW”!!! “Do they have there own little city”. “Amazing”!!! As she walked through the city she saw shops just like the original city. “Hey do you know where the hair salon is” said Samantha.

“HAHAHA you fool!!! We don't have hair salons here”. “Hi my name is Rachel what's your name”.

“Um my name is Samantha”. “So, where do you live” said Rachel.

“I live just over that hill on a farm”.

“Wow, you live on a farm. That's amazing I wish I lived on a farm” said Rachel. “Wait! What farm” said Rachel,

“the one over that hill” said Samantha. “Oh no!!! Your on your own on that one mate” said Rachel.

“Um OK what are you talking about” said Samantha,

“You didn't know” said Rachel “know what” said Samantha. “You didn’t know about the farm”. “Well the farm is Haunted because the old farmer that lived there died because a cow ate him” said Rachel. “NO WAY” said Samantha. So little Sam ran off and asked her parents if the farm was haunted and they said “WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT GO OUTSIDE AND FEED THE COWS”. “I wonder if Rachel was actually telling the truth because I hear noises while i'm sleeping plus the first time I walked into the house the air was heavy”? “Rachel Rachel, you were right my house is haunted” “I told you” said Rachel. Well you can live with us if you want said Rachel.... "Um I don't know um" "DO YOU WANT TO GET HAUNTED BY A GHOST" "OK OK calm down" Yes I will live with you.

Paraphrasing

Mr Wiseman gave us an activity to paraphrase our thoughts. So thats what I did

Anzac Day Memorial

700 - 800 people from New Zealand went Gallipoli. Young and Old men dying haven't lived there life up to the fullest. And it all started when a BIG boat arrived at the viduck people saying good bye to their dads and their uncles. Tears coming down there faces and kids having panic attacks. There dads were bound to protect their countries and their families, There were many wounded and even some people coming off ships on stretchers.  Families were really sad and happy to see their Dad even when he came off with a missing body part. Some Dads and Uncles NEVER CAME BACK EVER!!  

Some kids never were the same any more because it's a really hard seeing their Dad with a broken mind. They could not sleep because there friends died or can’t stop thinking about death and gun shots. Its really sad when you never see your Dad / Uncle again because there were the ones that looked after you and loved you.

THE END

This is a Story about broken hearts, Sadness, Kids with out a Dad/Uncle so love your dad. Thank you Please leave an comment