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Tuesday, 12 August 2014

Diamante poem

Hi this is A Diamante poem that Mrs Garden gave us. It was so cool to make but really devistateing because it was about war. War is sad to work on but this activity was fun so enjoy my poem. Please leave me some feed back

1 comment:

  1. You capture the theme of war well. Check line 2, it is supposed to have adjectives (describing words).

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