There was 6 children that were less founchint than other people because they had no money for food or drink. The older sister wanted to go to this party because there was heaps of food like chips, ice cream, chocolate and sausage rolls you had to wear a costume.
Her costume was a octopus made out of ripped up sheets she thought it was going to look ugly but it look kind of cool. Her brother gave her a paper bag for her head it looked like a real face and she left for the party. She was swing her flippers around and she was starving so she went to eat but she couldn't because she was wearing her undies!
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Your retelling skills are getting better and better Michael. There are a few things you might need to fix like the sentence that says: She was swing. Instead of swing, what do you think it should say?
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